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Published: 1987
Illustrator: Elaine Duillo
Published by: Onyx
Genres: Historical Romance, Erotic Romance, Medieval Romance
Pages: 438
Format: eBook, Paperback
Buy on: Amazon, AbeBooks
Reviewed by: Introvert Reader
The Book
Like in all Bertrice Small novels, the history in Enchantress Mine is richly detailed, the villains are just whacked-out, and there’s a lot of WTF situations that make you shake your head, blink and wonder, “What just happened?”
But, I don’t know…
I guess I just don’t enjoy some of Bertrice Small’s books as much as I do other bodice rippers.
A Too-Perfect Heroine
Enchantress Mine is set in the Middle Ages, during the height of the Byzantine Empire. The heroine, Mairin, is a foundling raised by adopted parents.
Oh, Mairin, how to describe her? The cover art is the best thing about her. I both hated and pitied the poor girl. So many horrific things happened to Mairin, but I didn’t care because she was SOOOO perfect, SOOOO beautiful, SOOOO resilient!
Every man that wasn’t either her relative or 100% gay desired her and had to have her–stop me if you’ve heard this before! She was just the typical most beautiful-woman-on-earth, the kind of heroine that Bertrice Small adored to write about.
And she was such a Mary Sue! I had no patience nor any love for her.
Still, poor Mairin!
The Heroes: Bachelors #1,#2, & #3
Despite the variety of men, her romantic life is the worst.
Her first love, Basil, a nobleman of Constantinople, is poisoned to death by his male ex-lover, a jealous actor.
Another admirer of hers is ironically named Eric Longsword. He no penis and can only pee by using a hollow reed!
Somehow, he still can bring Mairin to orgasmic heights.
The other guy, her true love, Josselin, suffers from the worst malady of all as he’s plain boring!
He comes into the picture late in the book, as often does in a Bertrice Small romance. If Joss had more character development than merely lusting after Mairin, there might have been a chance to like him.
Of her three love interests, the main hero the least memorable.


(That’s Fabio on the back cover as Eric Longsword, LOL)
Final Analysis of Enchantress Mine
Yes, some aspects of Enchantress Mine sound crazy as heck. You would think a book like that would be more exciting. And it almost is, at times.
However Mairin is so perfect and so tedious. I didn’t care what happened to her.
Bertrice Small can do better! And she has. I prefer her Tudor and Stuart-era novels such as Skye O’Malley, All the Sweet Tomorrows, or Wild Jasmine instead.
2.5 Stars
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Synopsis
From the golden pleasure domes of Constantinople to the barbaric pomp of Malcolm of Scotland’s court, this is the magical tale of ravishingly beautiful Mairin of Aelfleah, called “Enchantress” by the three men who loved her: Basil, Prince of Byzantium, who taught her passion’s tender secrets; Josselin de Combourg, gallant knight of William the Conqueror…and Eric Longsword, the Viking whose tragic love for Mairin would never be fulfilled. And in their wild world gone mad with savage war, only love could triumph over all!
ENCHANTRESS MINE by BERTRICE SMALL